I dream a sea awash in ships:
Irish leather-skins,
Wooden dories,
Yankee whalers.
A transatlantic coffin ship,
Irish leather skins
Packed in human humidity
And rats
Within.
Bright white and blue
Gloucester trawler’s huffing funnel,
Smiling crew,
Hanging metal nets
Shine, anticipating.
Leather skins stand at the rail,
Set in sepia tone,
Eternally waving goodbye.
Ghost-driven, rust-eaten,
Trawler risen from the deep,
Her crew, no longer smiling, sleep
A deep, amniotic sleep
Unknown to air-dwellers.
I dream a sea awash in ships
Crossing, passing, intersecting,
Leaving foamy traces in their wakes.
I am sand and sea-foam.
I once clung to pilings
In stinking Queenstown harbor.
A passing wave caught me
And carried me to America,
Depositing me on the shore,
A seed asleep in the sand.
It is said that nothing will grow in sand
But I did.
And though it is said that we are dust
And to dust we shall return,
I am sand and sea-foam.
I will return to the sand.
9 comments:
Nice, Cricket. Very nice.
i'm glad a few words of praise could bring this out into the light for more to enjoy. thank you for being willing to share it at my place in the first place. this really is a marvelous bit of writing that leaves me just as breathless on subsequent readings as on the first.
Ah.. very nicely done. You paint quite the scene with your words.
Nicely done, indeed.
Truly, a superb bit of writing, my swell pal. Well done!
Stopping by to say thanks for visiting my blog.
Such beautiful prose...your imagery is fantastic...I can see the trawler, I can smell the sea, I can feel the desolation.
Magnificent!
I love the last verse, it holds such a joyful and hopeful image
Nicely done, Cricket :-) I have a terrible habit, my mind wanders whenever I read poetry, and I create images in my head to go with the words.
So it is unfortunate that Gloucester made me think of Richard III and now I've got this rather hilarious vision in my head of King Richard, clinging to the hull of a ship, sneering about kingdoms and horses.
Totally unrelated to your poem, which is entirely lovely, but evidently my brain insists on creating puppet shows within it.
Beautiful Cricket. Just beautiful.
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